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May 29, 2009
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:iconkyuubinight:
The open road, its call is so loud that even the ghosts of the past hear it. So many memories both great and painful.

I really do like how this design came out. The colors are nice and the lines are crisp.

I am getting better!

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:iconjoshdixart:
Crit: Tattoos need to be designed for a specific part of the body, especially tribal. Tribal is supposed to curve with the body and define the shapes underneath the skin. Your design looks very random and lacks any kind of flow. Also, simplify, Even on my 19in screen this looks crowded and a mess. Bring this into any tattoo shop worth their muster and there gonna laugh at you. Tattoo lines slowly spread over time, therefore you need more space in between your lines. You definitely need to work on making your lines cleaner and smoother.
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~KyuubiNight May 30, 2009  Student Traditional Artist
Honestly, these tribal-esque designs are more art than function. I do this for fun not for a career. I know its squished and horrible. Its not like I haven't gotten this treatment before.
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:iconjoshdixart:
A crit is not a flame or a bash, you have just chosen to take it that way. I assume because it is under "tattoo design" that the tattooability of said design should be taken into account when critiquing. You requested a crit, you got one. Don't cry when someone points out what you did wrong.
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~KyuubiNight May 31, 2009  Student Traditional Artist
I understand its a critque, I'm over it.
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~SHARPIEMAN-TMJ May 29, 2009  Hobbyist Artist
D: BASTARD... i just find out how to do animals in tribal today... and then i come across a Mecha-Dragon-Beast-God-Thing... kinda Dwarfing XD fuckin-a this is awesome. studying it actually showed me a couple things about this type of art (sweet use of flame colors btw) looks authentic as hell (with the exception of said flame colors)... dammit that looks fucking kool XD
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~KyuubiNight May 29, 2009  Student Traditional Artist
the funny thing is its all handrawn
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~SHARPIEMAN-TMJ May 29, 2009  Hobbyist Artist
i know XD you can tell its hand drawn
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